573. REVIEW: From the Ashes ~ Arurelia Abbott ~ Twilight Fantasies Publication


Title: From the Ashes
Author: Arurelia Abbott
Publisher: Twilight Fantasies Publication
Website of Publisher: www.twilightfantasies.com
Date Published: 2006
ISBN 1-934495-08-05
ISBN: 13: 978-1-934495-08-7
Format: Ebook
Length: 36 pages

Hannah was dumped two years ago by her demon lover Will, and is still hanging on to the love she has for him. Finally Michael (who has been dumped by Tricia) declares his desire for a relationship that goes beyond their lasting friendship. They have both been spending a lot of time together since their lovers have left, but until now is has not bloomed into a deeper relationship. Finally as Hannah decides to move on with her life by literally moving to a new town, Michael offers to accompany her. But, wait Will returns and need her. Hannah has decisions to make.

Who ends a 36 page story with “to be continued”? Maybe it should just be listed as Chapters 1-6. I understand the need to express what is going on in the characters mind, but would like to read a lot more dialogue. Discussions even arguing can bring out a lot of the inner characters in a more interesting fashion than the narrative. Story line is all right, but not very dynamic. It would also be interesting to have a little more flashbacks into her relationship with Will, and her friendships with Tricia & Michael.



Aris
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